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Feel

I put myself to sleep with a thought
Never knew it would not let me sleep again
It was you that I had always sought
Didn't know I would lose myself in the bargain

The thought was as simple as it could be 
A question whose answer I longed to seek 
I yearned to have you by me
But fate wished for something bleak

I told you how I feel
You said you saw it the other way 
It left a lil something that could never heal 
But the thought still remained and I never could say

The month of May
Was when things took turn anew 
The thought eventually found it's way
When she asked,
'How does it feel to be with you?'

In his embrace paradise she found
Life for her was all glee
The thought still continues to resound 
Inopportune, but the she never was me !!

Thursday, June 17, 2010

Feel

I put myself to sleep with a thought
Never knew it would not let me sleep again
It was you that I had always sought
Didn't know I would lose myself in the bargain

The thought was as simple as it could be 
A question whose answer I longed to seek 
I yearned to have you by me
But fate wished for something bleak

I told you how I feel
You said you saw it the other way 
It left a lil something that could never heal 
But the thought still remained and I never could say

The month of May
Was when things took turn anew 
The thought eventually found it's way
When she asked,
'How does it feel to be with you?'

In his embrace paradise she found
Life for her was all glee
The thought still continues to resound 
Inopportune, but the she never was me !!

2 Comments:

At June 17, 2010 at 5:35 AM , Blogger Aishwarya said...

The poem is simple... as the best ones are.... and is heartfelt. Can feel the pain and the hope... nicely done Mantri :)

 
At June 17, 2010 at 1:47 PM , Blogger Midhun Murali said...

doubtlessly the poem exemplifies the beauty of simplicity and touches the heart at some point, may be the last stanza. keep writing and I would love to see more happy posts here :)

 

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